Dear STUDENT X, Congratulations on being a Gen.www.Y students.
The thinking, organizing, listing of procedures, and carrying out
of a project are tremendous skills to develop as a life-long learning
process.
As a consultant. I look at your project proposal in two ways:
I first look at the Ideas and Concepts you have that you want to
use and teach with, and then I look at you Objectives, Procedures,
and Assessments to see if they all fit together to make this happen.
The suggestions I have made are in brackets and all capital letters
(LIKE THIS). Some of the suggestions have to do with some writing
skills, like spelling, capitalization, or complete sentences. Other
suggestions have to do with the content of your proposal. My suggestions
are only suggestions and are to assist in making your project the
best it can be. You may choose not to use the suggestions.
You seem very organized and I cannot tell if your spelling errors
are indeed errors or typos. Always check your spelling. I like the
use of both teacher and student feedback in assessment. I have some
suggestions that should make that information a little more meaningful.
Assessments should refer directly to all of the objectives and include
a standard of measurement.
You need to go back after you have gone over the objectives and
then make sure that each part is accounted for in your assessment.
I like to recommend that for your own objectives you include a rating
scale for how well you did to reach you objectives. You can set
the standard yourself and then you will also have set a goal for
yourself. We all tend to do better work that way. A rubric scale
is a good way to get your feedback from everyone involved. You just
need to describe how a good project can be recognized. Find something
that works well for you and then use it consistently. Good luck
on your project. You will have fun learning about all the materials
you will be putting together for your teacher. I think you have
an interesting project proposal. This is one of the most well-thought
out projects I have seen for a while. GO FOR IT!
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