Hi Student X,

You have given me the great pleasure of reading an EXCELLENT proposal. I have consulted for three years and your work is on the top of the list. I hope others will benefit from you as I have. Thank You.

When you have your presentation ready to share with your class, practice setting up the equipment as you want everything to run smoothly. Sometimes computers/projectors don't always work when you want them to so be ready to troubleshoot.

Good luck. If you need any specific information for your project - let me know.

Sincerely,
Kevin Hoonan

Exemplary
The writing demonstrates exceptionally strong control of technical writing conventions (e.g., punctuation, spelling, capitalization, grammar and usage) and uses them effectively to enhance communication. Errors are so few and so minor that the reader can easily skim right over them unless specifically searching for them. The writing is characterized by:

• strong control of conventions
• strong, effective use of punctuation that guides the reader through the text
• correct spelling, even of more difficult words
• correct grammar and usage that contributes to clarity and style
• little or no need for editing.

Exemplary
The primary theme of the project is thoroughly supported by the information provided in each section of the proposal form. All sections of the form are completed with appropriate detail and accuracy. The proposal is characterized by:

• Project objectives which are fully and individually addressed by the procedural steps.
• EALRs (for WA State schools; otherwise, optional local standards) which accurately align with the objectives of the project.
• Procedural steps which demonstrate a high level of skill in task analysis.
• Assessment strategies which fully address each of the original objectives for the project.

Exemplary
The proposal is exceptionally clear, focused, and interesting. A reader would have no trouble replicating the project from its written description. It demonstrates a thorough understanding and appreciation of the underlying principles of the Generation www.Y model. The successfully completed project will insure the enhanced use of technology in the school environment. The writing is characterized by:

• clarity, focus, and control
• clearly stated and appropriate objectives
• supporting, relevant, carefully selected details
• a thorough, balanced and in-depth procedural description
• content that is well-suited to the audience and purpose (i.e., posting to the Gen www.Y Website).